Mọi người đọc tham khảo bài viết cho đề youth crime ngày 30/9 nhé.
The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental
skills.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
Sample
It is true that more and more
young people are getting involved in crimes, and how to best address this
critical issue is an ongoing debate. There are many ways to prevent youth
crimes, one of which is better parenting skills; however, those ways need to be
carried out simultaneously if they are to be effective.
On the one hand, parents are the
closest people to their children and more likely to have an impact on their
children’s behaviour. In fact, a vast number of youth crimes nowadays are the
result of inappropriate childrearing, lack of childcare and education about
crime alike. Therefore, it is totally reasonable to say that improving
parenting skills will promise a decrease in juvenile offences.
However, education at home alone
is not enough since there are a lot of kids who are not willing to listen to
their parents. And children in this day and age spend the largest amount of
time at school, and therefore are more likely to be influenced by their teachers
or friends. For example, in my home country Vietnam, many high school students
are susceptible to negative peer pressure. This usually leads to the increasing
use of alcohol or drugs, all of which are primary contributors to crimes at
this age. These facts suggest that we should introduce education about the
consequences one may face when committing an offence in the school curriculum
as well as help children manage negative peer pressure.
In conclusion, enhancing skills
to educate children at home is a good way to curb juvenile delinquencies; but I
think there is no one best way to do this as different measures need to be
taken at the same time.
(282 words)
Vocabulary highlights:
1. More likely to have an impact: Có thể có ảnh hưởng
2. Inappropriate child rearing: Cách nuôi dạy con cái không hợp lý
3. Susceptible to negative peer pressure: Dễ bị ảnh hưởng tiêu cực từ bạn bè
4. Primary contributors to crimes: Những nguyên nhân chính dẫn đến tội phạm
5. Avoid negative peer pressure: Tránh những ảnh hưởng tiêu cực từ bạn bè
6. Curb juvenile delinquencies: Giảm thiểu tội phạm vị thành niên
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